I did several revisions for draft 2 of my proposal essay. Most of which were simple but necessary in order to improve the overall quality of the essay.
The first set of revisions that I did was to read through the entire essay and fix any errors that the computer was not able to recognize. These consisted of using the wrong "there" or the wrong "to". I also changed the wording on some of the sentences in all three paragraphs. Doing this help improve the flow of the essay and to help illustrate the point further.
The next thing I did was go over my sources and change a few. I made sure they were sighted properly and that they were authorized sources. I also changed a few from "dot com" sources to .gov sources that gave the same general information.
Finally, I went over the formatting of the essay and made sure everything was correct. I used the literacy guide to check that the margins were correct and to make sure my title and information was formatted correctly.
Good reflection, Michael. I hope the revision process continues to go smoothly.
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